hi for writing we had to make a poem and i did a line poem and wrote about my sports day game that was a challenge.
Sports poem
A cold and rainy winter morning
I awoke and flung the sportswear
The saturdays are the highlight
The way to nunweek is stressful
The thoughts filled my mind
My stomach coming up in waves while thinking about a big team to verse
My hope was big
Until i saw the opposing team, they looked promising
Walking onto the field brought excitement
Our game plan was real
Our team warming up
The whistle calling for the captain
Did we get the ball?
We got into our positions
The high pitched air sound of the whistle blew
The sticks smacking on one and other
The fast bang of the ball
“Bam” the first 5 minutes a goal was scored!
Rain fell instantly on our skin
Red rash from the wind
We were turning into ice.
10 minutes before half time was over “bam” the backboard clapped
2 goals were shot
Running up the opposing team scored
2-2 at half time
Our coach telling us to up our game
The water swooshing down my throat
I hope I don’t look lame
The refs hi viz jacket was bright
We chanted our chant and walked back on
The crowd cheering gave me a small a fright
The squeaky whistle went off
P.cs, long corners, sideline, 16s were done
The ball received and striked in the goal
Bang of the backboard
Clap of the crowd
The timer buzzed as we were soaked
Our smiles were so big, we were so proud...
We said well done to the opposing team
The gummy snakes were better than ever
As we walked out parents said well done
We were happy
Hi Maia,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem, it painted a really detailed picture in my mind about the game - props to you for winning it! Next time think about presenting your work differently.
-Miss Parker :)