Hi welcome back to my blog. This week for writing our goal was: Use a range of written features to engage the audience. Support ideas with detail (use an adverb to show how)
We had to describe what we could see.
This is my work
Gloomy
Lonely
Dark
Creepy
Pitch Black
Depressing
Sad
Mysterious
Dence
Endless
Eerie
Spine - chilling
Deadly
Murky
Foggy
Misty
Meaning
Death-trap
Simile
The branches were as long as a witches fingernail.
The branches were waving in the air like hair.
The tree branches were as sharp as knives.
The forest was a depressing gloomy place and the trees had branches as sharp as a witches nail.
Adjectives for smells
Spicy
Fresh
Sweet
Tasting
Citrus
Chocolatey
Floral
Fruity
Minty
Pleasant
Minty
Sentences
- The sweet and sugary candy floss smell slowly drifted through the air.
- Citrusy smells wafted through the air.
Hansel and Gretel feelings
Gretel: “Hansel, what do we do? Will we be here forever? I'm afraid of what will happen”
Hansel: “Don't worry Gretel, we will be okay. I'm sure dad will do something.” Deep in Hansel's mind he was scared as well, he was trying to be a good brother and look after her.
Adjectives for the witch's house
Sentence
Suddenly, in the clearing they spotted a house with a Rickey roof, a tall chimney, shadowy windows and a encrusted with...sweets
Suddenly, the trees had cleared. In the sight sat the yummiest house that they had ever seen the roof was brimming with melting icing, a chimney
Whats your favourite fairy tale story?
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