Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Miss Henderson. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Pages
Thursday, July 30, 2020
Area and Perimeter
Tuesday, July 28, 2020
Writing
Knock Knock* “ Oh, well hello there” She said “How can I help you?” She continued.
“Hi, We are from the girls scouts and we are selling some biscuits. Would you like to buy some?”the girls said.
“Of course I'll buy some, what do I need to do?”she asked.
The girls replied with “Just need to sign this,” they passed her a white, flat piece of paper, “and gave us $2.”
”Oh well that's easy”she said, signing the paper*.“So girls how has school been?” she asked
“Good thank you” the girls replied.
Giving them the paper and the $2 the old, kind hearten lady whispered.
“What lovely girls”
“Thank you!” The girls said and left.
Have you ever done a piece of writing like this?
Monday, July 27, 2020
Hansel and Gretel
Hi welcome back to my blog. This week for writing our goal was: Use a range of written features to engage the audience. Support ideas with detail (use an adverb to show how)
We had to describe what we could see.
This is my work
Gloomy
Lonely
Dark
Creepy
Pitch Black
Depressing
Sad
Mysterious
Dence
Endless
Eerie
Spine - chilling
Deadly
Murky
Foggy
Misty
Meaning
Death-trap
Simile
The branches were as long as a witches fingernail.
The branches were waving in the air like hair.
The tree branches were as sharp as knives.
The forest was a depressing gloomy place and the trees had branches as sharp as a witches nail.
Adjectives for smells
Spicy
Fresh
Sweet
Tasting
Citrus
Chocolatey
Floral
Fruity
Minty
Pleasant
Minty
Sentences
- The sweet and sugary candy floss smell slowly drifted through the air.
- Citrusy smells wafted through the air.
Hansel and Gretel feelings
Gretel: “Hansel, what do we do? Will we be here forever? I'm afraid of what will happen”
Hansel: “Don't worry Gretel, we will be okay. I'm sure dad will do something.” Deep in Hansel's mind he was scared as well, he was trying to be a good brother and look after her.
Adjectives for the witch's house
Sentence
Suddenly, in the clearing they spotted a house with a Rickey roof, a tall chimney, shadowy windows and a encrusted with...sweets
Suddenly, the trees had cleared. In the sight sat the yummiest house that they had ever seen the roof was brimming with melting icing, a chimney
Whats your favourite fairy tale story?
Thursday, July 23, 2020
The 9 Fantastic
P.S I couldn't finish all of them
Whats your favourite story?
Friday, July 3, 2020
How to help on giving feedback
rounding and Compensating
My prayer to Mary
Reading task!!
Today I will be showing you my reading for this week, my goal was to visualise using all of the senses, and talk about how this enriches meaning. Our task was to write down what we knew about the text and what they meant by it.
Do you like reading??
